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		mountain man Jeremiah Johnson hunted goose, moose and man
 but ate only livers from Crows
 obstrusively gruesome
 
 she stops in her tracks
 crows overhead, she cries caw-caw
 baby mountain girl
 
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		she stops in her trackscrows overhead, she cries caw-caw
 baby mountain girl
 
 she drops on her knees
 crowns my head, she cries oh-baby
 mountain oyster pearl
 
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		she drops on her kneescrowns my head, she cries oh-baby
 mountain oyster pearl
 
 knees muddy and scratched
 she stands up slowly, uncurling
 vertebra by vertebra
 straightening her crown she moves on
 
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		knees muddy and scratchedshe stands up slowly, uncurling
 vertebra by vertebra
 straightening her crown she moves on
 
 the empress has no clothes
 but wears her crown
 victorious and replete
 
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		dentist drills,crowns her front tooth
 a shade darker--
 no victory
 
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		dentist drills,crowns her front tooth
 a shade darker--
 no victory
 
 not thrilled with drills
 or canine’s bite, yet
 ache for my dentist
 and dad so much!
 
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		not thrilled with drills or canine’s bite, yet
 ache for my dentist
 and dad so much!
 
 dad's grin hangs in my mirror
 settling ache to a dull hum
 keeping my heart open
 
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		 (09-16-2013, 10:44 PM)ellajam Wrote:  not thrilled with drills or canine’s bite, yet
 ache for my dentist
 and dad so much!
 
 dad's grin hangs in my mirror
 settling ache to a dull hum
 keeping my heart open
 
That's beautiful, I am a little choked up...
	 
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		 (09-16-2013, 10:53 PM)ChristopherSea Wrote:   (09-16-2013, 10:44 PM)ellajam Wrote:  not thrilled with drills or canine’s bite, yet
 ache for my dentist
 and dad so much!
 
 dad's grin hangs in my mirror
 settling ache to a dull hum
 keeping my heart open
 That's beautiful, I am a little choked up...
   Sorry, I'll try to be more fun,    
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		No, I am grateful that you and newsclippings got me thinking about Dad.
	 
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		dad's grin hangs in my mirrorsettling ache to a dull hum
 keeping my heart open
 
 quicksilver pool
 swallowed my youth
 mirror, mirror, most unfair
 
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		quicksilver poolswallowed my youth
 mirror, mirror, most unfair
 
 Though no longer a youth
 I've still got my teeth
 It's still me in the mirror
 At least underneath
 
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		Though no longer a youthI've still got my teeth
 It's still me in the mirror
 At least underneath
 
 Underneath the mirror
 a new set of teeth ~
 Sleeping bat.
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		Underneath the mirrora new set of teeth ~
 Sleeping bat.
 
 Sleeping bats
 mid-September chances gone
 stadium emptied
 
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		Sleeping batsmid-September chances gone
 stadium emptied
 
 Wake up you
 silly sleeping ding-bats
 it's Autumn training for Halloween
 
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		Wake up you silly sleeping ding-bats
 it's Autumn training for Halloween
 
 Stop rubbing,
 You silly ball-sacks,
 it's Gold Bond season
 
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		Stop rubbing,You silly ball-sacks,
 it's Gold Bond season
 
 Nuts dry-roasted
 crushed and sacked
 dangling over Uranus marred
 
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		Nuts dry-roastedcrushed and sacked
 dangling over Uranus marred
 
 a never ending parade
 of nuts passes through
 good sense dangles on a thread
 
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		a never ending paradeof nuts passes through
 good sense dangles on a thread
 
 nuts through needle's eye
 the woman who doesn't shop
 has less sense of success
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		nuts through needle's eyethe woman who doesn't shop
 has less sense of success
 
 chestnut holocaust
 while Christmas shopping
 roasting gone foul
 made Ginsburg “Howl”
 
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