Embarrassment

[paranoid marvin]

Stomach cramps
On crowded bus;
Shit happens

[azure]

Why the random caps? The poem itself is somewhat funny, unless you've actually had an experience like that then it just surfaces repressed memories.

[paranoid marvin]

Why the random caps? The poem itself is somewhat funny, unless you've actually had an experience like that then it just surfaces repressed memories.

Thanks; yes the caps are unecessary, don't know why I did that in all honesty.

My intention was to elicit differing emotions, whether that was pity,revulsion, humour, embarrassment etc. all dependant upon one's own life experience. Whether that works is another thing entirely.

[Brownlie]

Brilliant! Now, this, this is a pun. Hyperbole, but I thought it was pretty funny.