Fauxku Choo Choo (the play's the thing)

[bena]

I am bit ion

good days are positive
bad days are negative


up and atom
charge the day
positivity attracts.

[Tiger the Lion]

up and atom
charge the day
positivity attracts.


atoms in eaves
dammed with decomposing 
leaves of attraction

[bena]

atoms in eaves
dammed with decomposing
leaves of attraction

Decomposing leaves
release damned atoms to the winds
leaving behind only imprints

[Magpie]

Decomposing leaves
release damned atoms to the winds
leaving behind only imprints


posing with leaves -
"Madam I'm Adam"
said a voice from behind

[just mercedes]

posing with leaves -
"Madam I'm Adam"
said a voice from behind

Adam leaves posing
to Madam's behind
and voices off applaud

[Magpie]

Adam leaves posing
to Madam's behind
and voices off applaud

discontented voices -
Adam and Eve
ill behind the apple tree

[bena]

discontented voices -

Adam and Eve
ill behind the apple tree 

discontented rumblings
ill from too many green apples
God's revenge on the atheist

[rayheinrich]

discontented trees
throw their rotten apples
at passing tourists

thrown rotten apples
confuse Newton
gravity not found

[just mercedes]

thrown rotten apples
confuse Newton
gravity not found

Newton found apples
confusing; still waiting for
pineapples to fall

[rayheinrich]

Newton found apples
confusing; still waiting for
pineapples to fall


in the Fall
Fall apples fall
pineapples fall
Fall, Spring, and Winter

[Magpie]

in the fall 
fall apples fall
pineapples fall
fall, spring, and winter

snowflakes flutter throughout winter
spring invites the cuckoos call
sun shines bright as summer does enter
then departs ready for... AUTUMN it's called AUTUMN 

[rayheinrich]

snowflakes flutter throughout winter
spring invites the cuckoos call
sun shines bright as summer enters;
then departs ready for... AUTUMN it's called AUTUMN  Thumbsup


Autumn falls as Fall falls Autumn;
Spring's amused and Winter's pissed.
Summer chooses which to fall to,
follows falling leaves to Fall.

[bena]

[rayheinrich]

 

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What the fuck are you talking about? This is serious shit we're layin' down here.
If you want to fuck around you need to go to the 'Poetry For Fucking Around' forum;
the 'Poetry For Fun' forum has been cleaned up, locked down, had its asshole tightened up,
and in general elevated to the level of respectable poetry. And about time! Poetry is
serious shit (as has been previously stated) and any disrespect for the art must be dealt
with in an appropriate manner (weatherboarding is not torture).

[Magpie]

Autumn falls as Fall falls Autumn;
Spring's amused and Winter's pissed.
Summer chooses which to fall to,
follows falling leaves to Fall.

What the fuck are you talking about? This is serious shit we're layin' down here.
If you want to fuck around you need to go to the 'Poetry For Fucking Around' forum;
the 'Poetry For Fun' forum has been cleaned up, locked down, had its asshole tightened up, and in general elevated to the level of respectable poetry. And about time! Poetry is serious shit (as has been previously stated) and any disrespect for the art must be dealt with in an appropriate manner (weatherboarding is not torture).

I fitted the weatherboards
smoked some serious shit
spent an hour falling over singing
"Summertime and the living is sleazy..."

[Tiger the Lion]

Autumn falls as Fall falls Autumn;
Spring's amused and Winter's pissed.
Summer chooses which to fall to,
follows falling leaves to Fall.

What the fuck are you talking about? This is serious shit we're layin' down here.
If you want to fuck around you need to go to the 'Poetry For Fucking Around' forum;
the 'Poetry For Fun' forum has been cleaned up, locked down, had its asshole tightened up, and in general elevated to the level of respectable poetry. And about time! Poetry is serious shit (as has been previously stated) and any disrespect for the art must be dealt with in an appropriate manner (weatherboarding is not torture).

I fitted the weatherboards
smoked some serious shit
spent an hour falling over singing
"Summertime and the living is sleazy..."

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one too many
pennies
on the tracks

[bena]

one too many
pennies
on the tracks

pennies clutched in hands
the homeless man
walks the tracks

[rayheinrich]

                pennies clutched in hands
                the homeless man
                walks the tracks


                homeless man
                clutches pennies -
                well-less as well

[just mercedes]

the man didn't know
how to use a clutch
the car shuddered to think

The car didn't know
how to think. The man clutched
his St Christopher medal.

[just mercedes]

man, I can't find
my St. Christopher medal
must call St. Anthony

I'm no saint
I don't care which man calls;
Christopher, Anthony, anyone at all
as long as he has balls