[split] Vermeer (after RiverNotch)

[ellajam]

Vermeer




Poems are
like sunlight

and poets are the windows.

[DavidF]

Ears are
like scaffolds

and mirrored swine a necklace.

[Magpie]

Poems are 
like wood.

and poets are knot.

[ellajam]

^^^

[Leanne]

It's less about the wood than the pecker

[ellajam]

It's less about the wood than the pecker

[RiverNotch]

I composed a second version on this where, on a more serious note, I elaborated on how a poet's duty in the body of civilization is to have their hearts pierced so that they may hold beauty, ie be an earlobe, but Veneer killed it. xD Oh well, that gem would have probably been overwrought in my hands -- someone up for the spit?

[Magpie]

I composed a second version on this where, on a more serious note, I elaborated on how a poet's duty in the body of civilization is to have their hearts pierced so that they may hold beauty, ie be an earlobe, but Veneer killed it. xD Oh well, that gem would have probably been overwrought in my hands -- someone up for the spit?

Ah come on... I never felt so guilty about something since I was at school.
Ella started it so I thought it was fine to follow she has that kind of influence on things round here. Also once I've misread a word then it is forever imprinted on my brain so within seconds of seeing a post called Vermeer I knew what the future would be.   I'm sorry.
So now you can post your second version and I can get rid of my guilt trip. Amen. Excellent 

[ellajam]

I composed a second version on this where, on a more serious note, I elaborated on how a poet's duty in the body of civilization is to have their hearts pierced so that they may hold beauty, ie be an earlobe, but Veneer killed it. xD Oh well, that gem would have probably been overwrought in my hands -- someone up for the spit?

Ah come on... I never felt so guilty about something since I was at school.
Ella started it so I thought it was fine to follow she has that kind of influence on things round here. Also once I've misread a word then it is forever imprinted on my brain so within seconds of seeing a post called Vermeer I knew what the future would be.   I'm sorry.
So now you can post your second version and I can get rid of my guilt trip. Amen. Excellent 

Sure, blame little innocent me.  
Well, it was posted it fun, we had fun. It's split now. I expect a venerable venereal poem next.

River, do you want the original moved to Misc.?

[Magpie]

  Yeah!! Does that mean we can have more fun?

Well I've got to go out now but for the moment how about...

Poems are
like weather
and poets are wind

Poems are
like Neptune
and poets are Uranus

Poems are
like a pancake
and poets are waffle

Poems are
like reservoirs
and poets are dammed

Poems are
like blacksmiths
and poets are hammered

Poems are
like dogs
and poets are bitches

Poems are
like an ambulance
and poets are nee nah

Poems are
like the sounds of spring
and poets are cuckoo

[ellajam]

*applause*

[RiverNotch]

I composed a second version on this where, on a more serious note, I elaborated on how a poet's duty in the body of civilization is to have their hearts pierced so that they may hold beauty, ie be an earlobe, but Veneer killed it. xD Oh well, that gem would have probably been overwrought in my hands -- someone up for the spit?

Ah come on... I never felt so guilty about something since I was at school.
Ella started it so I thought it was fine to follow she has that kind of influence on things round here. Also once I've misread a word then it is forever imprinted on my brain so within seconds of seeing a post called Vermeer I knew what the future would be.   I'm sorry.
So now you can post your second version and I can get rid of my guilt trip. Amen. Excellent 

By I lost it, I meant I forgot. xD All is well.

[RiverNotch]

Also, inspiration:

[Vanity]

S   lol  quote='ambrosial revelation' pid='211968' dateline='1465498288']


Poems are 
like wood.

and poets are knot.
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