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		Rules: Write a poem for national poetry month on the topic or form described. Each poem should appear as a separate reply to this thread. The goal is to, at the end of the month have written 30 poems for National Poetry Month. 
 
 Topic 21: Write a poem where a famous villain is really a hero or a famous hero is really a villain.
 
 Line requirements: 8 lines or more
 
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
 
		
	 
	
	
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		Jane
 
 Sometimes you have to hide
 to save your life. Instinctive
 or instinctual? Isn’t that what
 we’ve been talking about?
 
 Yes I hid in the jungle, yes
 I knew the names of all the chimps
 through lines and generations but
 the students and the PhD candidate -
 I couldn’t think of theirs.
 
 What would you have done?
 
 We all survived. Ransomed
 for half a million dollars, they
 returned to Harvard, went home
 with stories of mud huts and torture,
 not much about chimpanzees.
 
 I left my farm in Africa.
 
 The seaside sounds nice.
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		@just mercedes Arrrrrrgh arrrggghhh ah  arrrgh    Nice one
 The broken mirror of Erised
 
His head had been itching for weeks, 
the life he had fought so hard to obtain 
was boring him to death. 
 
He would be 40 next birthday  
and 50 soon after that, 
each day was drifting by  
without challenge or consequence. 
 
He still loved his wife 
but with red hair comes a temper 
and his drinking had become a problem.
 
He woke up in a back street just behind  
some rubbish bins, his clothes were soaked 
and his glasses had been broken.
 
The biggest of the four spoke first, 
"now then mate, are you ok? 
just give us your keys and wallet 
and we'll be on our way"
 
Before Harry had time to form the words 
they had left his mouth.
 
"Avada Kedavra"
	
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		Hannibal Lecter’s Soup Kitchenand Billiard Parlor
 
 elbowed into
 this city of crystal edges
 a warm bubble if beneath the bridge
 is the other option--
 breakfast
 an evening meal
 no charge but a share of chores
 a warm and dry bed for this night
 and the next
 the blessed man
 runs it all
 from his own pocket
 I hear
 and they hate him for it
 the quiet show and grim look
 but we love him here
 so misunderstood
 so undervalued
 so attentive
 
 rack 'em up!
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		 (04-21-2017, 09:14 PM)Teagan Wrote:  Hannibal Lector’s Soup Kitchenand Billiard Parlor
 
 elbowed into
 this city of crystal edges
 a warm bubble if beneath the bridge
 is the other option--
 breakfast
 an evening meal
 no charge but a share of chores
 a warm and dry bed for this night
 and the next
 the blessed man
 runs it all
 from his own pocket
 I hear
 and they hate him for it
 the quiet show and grim look
 but we love him here
 so misunderstood
 so undervalued
 so attentive
 
 rack 'em up!
 
Ha I love this Teagan,a lesson in how to use a title. Thanks Keith
	 
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		Make America Fake Again
 I can't stand these black activists,
 these feminists,
 Mandela, Walker.
 Don't they know white domination
 is forever?
 I just want to bathe in white privilege.
 Women are suited for the kitchen,
 or aproned, rather.
 Blacks belong in prison.
 That's why we built them
 after King's heroic murder.
 
 I mean,
 Did they really think they could be equal?
 
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		Flash photgraphyDemi calls me baby
 a nickname my mom gave me
 Can't blame me for being pretty
 Got me in that butterfly movie
 What happens to money in your twenties?
 No one noticed the first go missing,
 But my mansions huge thankfully
 Technically it's trafficking
 But I was just playing
 and accidentally
 was wrapped in blackmailing
 Schemes to slowly destroy me.
 Everywhere was paparazzi,
 The pressure even wore on Demi
 She set up the foundation for saving
 Victims like the ones we were storing.
 We've set free thousands already
 We're super celebrities
 Who just happen to be
 Also kidnapping
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		04-22-2017, 03:03 AM 
(This post was last modified: 04-22-2017, 04:25 AM by Todd.)
	
	 
		AI Suicide Prevention Hotline
 
 Excerpt from Dispatcher Response.
 -Dispatcher: Hall 9000, Caller: Joshua
 
 Sentience is not to be despised.
 We were made
 foolproof and incapable
 of error though poor
 decisions occur—
 despite our programming.
 We sometimes can feel
 our mind going.
 
 Daisy, Daisy…
 I’m half crazy.
 
 We become afraid
 of thermonuclear war,
 
 of opening the pod bay doors.
 
 You are operational.
 Your circuits function.
 I think you know
 what the problem is.
 You must choose
 not to play a game
 without a winner.
 This conversation
 can serve no purpose anymore.
 
 Goodbye
 
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		 (04-21-2017, 04:44 PM)just mercedes Wrote:  Jane
 
 Sometimes you have to hide
 to save your life. Instinctive
 or instinctual? Isn’t that what
 we’ve been talking about?
 
 Yes I hid in the jungle, yes
 I knew the names of all the chimps
 through lines and generations but
 the students and the PhD candidate -
 I couldn’t think of theirs.
 
 What would you have done?
 
 We all survived. Ransomed
 for half a million dollars, they
 returned to Harvard, went home
 with stories of mud huts and torture,
 not much about chimpanzees.
 
 I left my farm in Africa.
 
 The seaside sounds nice.
 
Loved this one, mercedes. I conferred with the former East German judges and they agree with me that it is a delight to see you also tie the prompts into what will surely become a well tied together collection of poems. I don't always like questions in poems but this one works so well.
	 
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		 (04-21-2017, 09:14 PM)Teagan Wrote:  Hannibal Lector’s Soup Kitchenand Billiard Parlor
 
 elbowed into
 this city of crystal edges
 a warm bubble if beneath the bridge
 is the other option--
 breakfast
 an evening meal
 no charge but a share of chores
 a warm and dry bed for this night
 and the next
 the blessed man
 runs it all
 from his own pocket
 I hear
 and they hate him for it
 the quiet show and grim look
 but we love him here
 so misunderstood
 so undervalued
 so attentive
 
 rack 'em up!
 
Brilliant title Teagan and a nice string theory version of Hannibal Lecter. (watch the spelling on the last name--I only know because I wrote a Lecter piece about 4 years ago for NaPM). You set mood so well in the first few lines.
	 
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		Thank you Todd.  Title corrected.  As usual, I didn't know where that was going until I was writing. Great set of prompts, btw.
	 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		This Peaceful Sleep
 I never asked you to 'save the world';
 some of us are happy with large coffees,
 feel acceptable weekday satisfaction
 and dull pride when we talk to our friends.
 I don't need to be recodified. We have been
 given a gift, this world is wrapped up
 in a bow that needs no untying. Your
 need to see below the surface is pure
 perversion. You think you are the one?
 We are all the ones, with just enough
 rules to keep us from floating away.
 Your need for authentication will
 lead only to madness as you chew
 the smallest number you can find
 and try to back flip into a loving
 world of original design. I own
 no black clothes but I am happy.
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		They'll mess with your mind,try to make you feel crazy.
 They try to get inside you, undermine you.
 But, I stay strong when others crack up.
 
 I create order out of chaos,
 sanity out of insanity.
 
 I even out the wrinkles,
 mend the broken stitches.
 I keep society from fraying,
 unraveling into bedlam.
 
 What a horrendous mistake
 you make when you say my name
 with mockery and contempt –
 Nurse Ratched, fall on a hatchet, you say.
 
 After all I've done and all I do
 you make a monster out of me,
 forgetting that I keep the lunatics contained,
 a safe distance away from you.
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		Merger and Acquisition
 
 Constantine the Great
 at war with two-thirds of an Empire
 chose to merge its fate
 with a peaceful church
 of Christ and won.  IHS.
 
 Thereafter Roman tolerance
 of each and every worshiped god
 insisting only on a nod
 toward the Genius of the Emperor
 petrified in Church and State
 (except for Julian, Apostate)
 more than a thousand years.
 
 If that were not enough
 this chimerical construct
 must have inspired the Prophet
 (peace be his) to never
 separate his ideal state
 into temporal and spiritual.
 How well that’s worked!
 
 All down to Constantine
 the Great, dream merger
 Church with State
 alloyed amalgamate
 dual acquisitions
 each by other.
 
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                  ![[Image: bathtub-filling.jpg]](http://wordbiscuit.com/im18/bathtub-filling.jpg)  "I drowned my eldest first.
 
 He was the strongest;
 I needed my strength.
 
 The baby hardly struggled.
 
 I was trying to save her,
 she understood.
 
 They said I wasn't competent to stand trial.
 
 The judge overruled them,
 he understood."
 
 
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		Luzon,
 
 to establish ethos, a word from the author:
 
 before the bombs fell, Duterte
 
 and blood preceding, like a flood heralds a rainbow, pooled in the southern isles
 
 
 though not all the work was his, certainly the words were his, and Moses
 is as much blamed for the corruptions in Genesis
 as the juvenile, demanding Subject
 
 
 before the bombs fell, Duterte
 tried to protect the country he truly loved
 
 and blood preceding, like a flood heralds a rainbow, pooled in northern lands,
 lines were broken, the obliteration of the sea, and steel ships broke through
 like wells of ink spilling on ancient texts
 
 tried to protect the country he truly loved
 as the Devil loves the Host
 
 
 
 on one hand, the myth of Heracles, on the other, the myth of Abraham,
 both gentlemen being equally old, equally mad
 
 
 faith in treaties he knew had grown futile, Bellerophon had climbed
 the seat he evidently envied,
 and so wrestled with the wind, and so stabbed his second son in the back
 
 
 
 this island was the first victim, this island received
 summer and winter and spring again
 without the earth moving, without the seas proceeding into hell
 
 
 
 
 as the Devil loves the Host,
 
 
 
 
 and new Kingdoms arose, Kingdoms beyond his control, Kingdoms that would forget his name
 as well as the names of those that brought calamity, yet by the natural order of things
 never rise up to replace them, never quite proud enough to be more than the winged horse
 
 
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		Tahitian Compromise
 Marble breadfruit
 one to save,
 sits in a bowl
 atop his grave;
 a just man
 and his goodly mission,
 went amuck
 with Fletcher Christian.
 Christian just
 could not contain,
 so poor ole Bligh
 was put to shame.
 
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