10-17-21

[Tiger the Lion]

delinquent autumn
foliage still holding green--
short shorts and tank tops

[RiverNotch]

lovely. my one issue is the tyranny of 5-7-5 is sustained here, in an English language haiku, where it is slightly detrimental -- "holds" rather than "holding" (or at least a two-syllable verb of the same tense)