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My weakness

My weakness
Mark A Becker Offline
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#1
07-06-2025, 09:11 PM
My weakness

I weather
your thunder
and lightning

but your tears
I cannot
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dukealien Offline
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#2
07-06-2025, 09:33 PM
(07-06-2025, 09:11 PM)Mark A Becker Wrote:  My weakness

I weather
your thunder
and lightning

but your tears
I cannot

Very nice.  And her (conventionally) weakness... isn't.
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