Africa
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Africa


1. Delenda Est


First the verdure that was the Sahara then
a city for growing figs, a country for hosting
nonbelievers, that same country's harbors,

experiments in empire, vain dictators:
here you will always find some thing that cries
"destroy me!" and the universe's answer,
only what portion now maintains this echo?


2. Cabo Verde


The Mansa's ambition to find what long ago
Plato envisioned, what Erikson later found,
and what even later Columbus would despoil,

led him to gather Mali's nascent wealth
and purchase a fleet of ships, recruiting men
from all around the coast to be their crew.

At first, the winds blew straightly and steadily west
but then each day the sun climbed up the sky
lower and lower, Polaris drew nearer and nearer,

until they feared that they were trapped in a gyre
soon to restore them far too early home.
They were about to try and change their tack

when from the prow of their foremost a shout
rang even to the aftmost of the file:
"Land ho!" The sailors, at their captains' nod,

scrambled to skirt around the sight and find
safe harbor for their barks, only they spied
along a line of sand between the sea

and endless laurel forests familiar signs:
either from native stone or wood carved out
stood haloed crosses. To these Blessed Isles
they had been bested by some Irish jack.


3. Sénégal


Resistance to this foreign way of life
would have continued if another way
had not gone past intrusion through the trade

of human lives for manufactured goods
into conquest, a struggle borne through arms
more than through preaching ending not with vengeance

but with a lasting reprieve, the squabbling neighbors 
sensing much greater harm in competition.
And now, in this part of the world, Islam is seen

as brotherhood's beating heart, while the Holy Rood,
raised for a Man who declared he came not with peace
but with a gleaming sword, is a dismal record

of depopulation through mass enslavement followed
by an abundantly pointless imperial project.
Wherefore, to those that denigrate, a question:
what kaftan passes through tall grass unstained?


4. The Congo


One theory goes that sunlight, when absorbed
by naked skin, transforms into nutrition
that helps a man grow tall, and in the dense

rainforests of these banks, such light could barely
enter the growth, the people turning "pygmy",
only in part through such a thoughtless name

they're often seen as less than people---some
would chain them up for work, while others even
as cattle may be butchered to be eaten

for senseless slaughter---better to remember
how in their vivid tapestry of tongues
they're fond to call themselves: Batwa, Bambuti,
Baka, Bongo, Bambenga, and Bakola.


5. Namibia and Botswana


Consider these two desert countries, neither
having much value in terms of their position
nor (when first by their colonial masters

spotted) in terms of nature's hardly hidden
gifts, today more stable than their neighbors
yet only one's more prosperous, the poorer

still caught up in the games its masters played,
facing first genocide then apartheid,
the richer completely superfluous---the former

never within its borders finding wealth,
the latter after freedom striking gems.
Stability is simply never catching

so much attention that what greedy empires
cast you a lurid glance still leave your borders
meek and organic, free from ethnic strife,

and what lands lie between them scarcely scoured,
whereas prosperity is just as simply
the luck of the draw, the proper set of cards

dealt at the proper time by a proper hand.
History, as it is, has little greatness
except in its consequences, in the burdens
carried by its survivors and their offspring.


6. Tithonus, King of Kings


The giant asked the god to be immortal
but not to be divine, neither to lie 
nor sit nor stand nor even leap beyond 

the limits of this flesh, for he knew well
Eos could offer one thing or another
but never both. To live as an idea

means vanishing in the instant that the mind
which spawned you passes into another room,
to live forever is to be the earth

on which all other lives proceed in courses
both more abrupt and worthier to take:
still, he could not conceive of any horror

greater than that of death, not even the body
withered so much that only the jaws, the throat,
the shoulders, the chest, and the diaphragm could move,

which is how both his offspring came to favor
risking their youth for senseless causes, Memnon
fighting to save a city he knew was doomed,

Alcides on the road to achieve his labors
by Emathion blocked, the noble line
that towering over all their Ethiopian
subjects governed as emperors cut short.


Probably the last NaPM 2026 piece I'll be putting up for critique.
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#2
(Yesterday, 08:24 PM)RiverNotch Wrote:  Africa


1. Delenda Est


First the verdure that was the Sahara then
a city for growing figs, a country for hosting
nonbelievers, that same country's harbors,

experiments in empire, vain dictators:
here you will always find some thing that cries
"destroy me!" and the universe's answer,
only what portion now maintains this echo?


2. Cabo Verde


The Mansa's ambition to find what long ago
Plato envisioned, what Erikson later found,
and what even later Columbus would despoil,

led him to gather Mali's nascent wealth
and purchase a fleet of ships, recruiting men
from all around the coast to be their crew.

At first, the winds blew straightly and steadily west
but then each day the sun climbed up the sky
lower and lower, Polaris drew nearer and nearer,

until they feared that they were trapped in a gyre
soon to restore them far too early home.
They were about to try and change their tack

when from the prow of their foremost a shout
rang even to the aftmost of the file:
"Land ho!" The sailors, at their captains' nod,

scrambled to skirt around the sight and find
safe harbor for their barks, only they spied
along a line of sand between the sea

and endless laurel forests familiar signs:
either from native stone or wood carved out
stood haloed crosses. To these Blessed Isles
they had been bested by some Irish jack.


3. Sénégal


Resistance to this foreign way of life
would have continued if another way
had not gone past intrusion through the trade

of human lives for manufactured goods
into conquest, a struggle borne through arms
more than through preaching ending not with vengeance

but with a lasting reprieve, the squabbling neighbors 
sensing much greater harm in competition.
And now, in this part of the world, Islam is seen

as brotherhood's beating heart, while the Holy Rood,
raised for a Man who declared he came not with peace
but with a gleaming sword, is a dismal record

of depopulation through mass enslavement followed
by an abundantly pointless imperial project.
Wherefore, to those that denigrate, a question:
what kaftan passes through tall grass unstained?


4. The Congo


One theory goes that sunlight, when absorbed
by naked skin, transforms into nutrition
that helps a man grow tall, and in the dense

rainforests of these banks, such light could barely
enter the growth, the people turning "pygmy",
only in part through such a thoughtless name

they're often seen as less than people---some
would chain them up for work, while others even
as cattle may be butchered to be eaten

for senseless slaughter---better to remember
how in their vivid tapestry of tongues
they're fond to call themselves: Batwa, Bambuti,
Baka, Bongo, Bambenga, and Bakola.


5. Namibia and Botswana


Consider these two desert countries, neither
having much value in terms of their position
nor (when first by their colonial masters

spotted) in terms of nature's hardly hidden
gifts, today more stable than their neighbors
yet only one's more prosperous, the poorer


still caught up in the games its masters played,
facing first genocide then apartheid,
the richer completely superfluous---the former

never within its borders finding wealth,
the latter after freedom striking gems.
Stability is simply never catching

so much attention that what greedy empires
cast you a lurid glance still leave your borders
meek and organic, free from ethnic strife,

and what lands lie between them scarcely scoured,
whereas prosperity is just as simply
the luck of the draw, the proper set of cards

dealt at the proper time by a proper hand.
History, as it is, has little greatness
except in its consequences, in the burdens
carried by its survivors and their offspring.


6. Tithonus, King of Kings


The giant asked the god to be immortal
but not to be divine, neither to lie 
nor sit nor stand nor even leap beyond 

the limits of this flesh, for he knew well
Eos could offer one thing or another
but never both. To live as an idea

means vanishing in the instant that the mind
which spawned you passes into another room,
to live forever is to be the earth

on which all other lives proceed in courses
both more abrupt and worthier to take:
still, he could not conceive of any horror

greater than that of death, not even the body
withered so much that only the jaws, the throat,
the shoulders, the chest, and the diaphragm could move,

which is how both his offspring came to favor
risking their youth for senseless causes, Memnon
fighting to save a city he knew was doomed,

Alcides on the road to achieve his labors
by Emathion blocked, the noble line
that towering over all their Ethiopian
subjects governed as emperors cut short.


Probably the last NaPM 2026 piece I'll be putting up for critique.

Too much landscape that fails to cohere into a sense of greater significance or impact. Where are we, what are we talking about, and why do I or for that matter the speaker care about any of it? 

It reads like a series of allusions drawn around a syllabus.

The structure seems to be:
-name a place
-drop some old names
-say some vague lofty things, make some sweeping gestures about human action, use some abstract nouns
-historical allusion
-unattached oracular declarative

I really don't know what to make of that action, or what any of it is driving at.
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#3
Thanks for the feedback. Re allusions, this one is relatively light on allusions, insofar as it's directly concerned with or it directly retells the myths and histories herein. I'm curious to see what (aside from in the first three stanzas, which are mostly allusion) you count as allusion.
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#4
My problem is with the content more than the form
It’s a fairly cliched view of Africa as a continent with nothing to offer other than suffering and corruption, like Trump’s America. It is a BBC World view of Africa, where the only good news is bad news.
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#5
(5 hours ago)busker Wrote:  My problem is with the content more than the form
It’s a fairly cliched view of Africa as a continent with nothing to offer other than suffering and corruption, like Trump’s America. It is a BBC World view of Africa, where the only good news is bad news.

I got this vibe as well, found it distasteful
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#6
Thanks for the feedback. I find that reading weird, since while suffering and enslavement is a recurring theme here, it's not really a focus---section 2 is a myth that doesn't involve it at all, sections 3 and 5 are specific counterexamples to that sort of narrative, and the suffering in section 6 is tied to figures for whom the only evidence is Western myth. Only sections 1 and 4 play to that sort of narrative.

(5 hours ago)busker Wrote:  My problem is with the content more than the form
It’s a fairly cliched view of Africa as a continent with nothing to offer other than suffering and corruption, like Trump’s America. It is a BBC World view of Africa, where the only good news is bad news.
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#7
When I think of Africa, the first thing I think of is Slavery. When I think of Slavery, the first thing I think of is America. When I think of America, the first thing I think of is History. When I think of History, the first thing I think of is History. When I think of History, the first thing I think of is History.
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