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#1
08-13-2011, 08:01 AM (This post was last modified: 08-13-2011, 08:02 AM by billy.)
Grassy meadows full
sheep give birth by the dozen--
Every one gets laid.
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08-19-2011, 09:36 AM
Cutting social commentary Smile I suppose to a sheep that must seem the most exciting thing to do.
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08-19-2011, 09:41 AM
that and they like gambolling, or so i heard hehe.
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08-19-2011, 02:40 PM
ROFLMDFAO

Sorry, no critique... I don't suppose you've seen the movie "PCU"? "Tonight, live at The Pit, 'Everyone Gets Laid' "...
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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08-20-2011, 07:33 PM
fraid not but it sounds okay Big Grin
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