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#20

08-20-2012, 03:55 PM

I think L2 needs an "a" before it and a dash after, the latter emphasising the change in thoughts, thus making this haiku even more hilarious Big Grin

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RE: kick - by Wildcard - 06-10-2012, 06:32 AM

RE: kick - by Erthona - 06-10-2012, 03:54 PM

RE: kick - by OneFourOne - 06-10-2012, 11:39 PM

RE: kick - by billy - 06-11-2012, 11:16 AM

RE: kick - by srijantje - 06-11-2012, 06:50 PM

RE: kick - by Erthona - 06-11-2012, 07:26 PM

RE: kick - by srijantje - 06-11-2012, 07:37 PM

RE: kick - by billy - 06-14-2012, 07:47 AM

RE: kick - by Aish - 06-16-2012, 11:49 AM

RE: kick - by srijantje - 06-16-2012, 05:29 PM

RE: kick - by billy - 06-16-2012, 06:57 PM

RE: kick - by srijantje - 06-17-2012, 05:20 PM

RE: kick - by Bronte - 08-20-2012, 06:49 PM

RE: kick - by Wildcard - 06-18-2012, 03:43 AM

RE: kick - by srijantje - 06-18-2012, 11:17 AM

RE: kick - by billy - 06-19-2012, 11:18 AM

RE: kick - by Aish - 06-19-2012, 12:53 PM

RE: kick - by billy - 06-20-2012, 11:13 AM

RE: kick - by srijantje - 06-21-2012, 11:42 PM

RE: kick - by heslopian - 08-20-2012, 03:55 PM

RE: kick - by billy - 08-21-2012, 11:48 AM

RE: kick - by Wildcard - 08-21-2012, 11:47 PM

RE: kick - by billy - 08-22-2012, 12:20 PM

RE: kick - by Wildcard - 08-22-2012, 11:48 PM

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