08-24-2012, 05:54 PM
Great narrative voice 
. That first and third stanza was intriguing as all heck (and what a great opening line). Thanks for the lovely read.
. That first and third stanza was intriguing as all heck (and what a great opening line). Thanks for the lovely read.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?