10-17-2012, 08:54 AM
(10-09-2012, 05:57 PM)billy Wrote: hi mr brown.Hi TimeOnMyHands here,just spotted this, so here is a belated Jolly Hello, from old blightey.
i'll leave some feedback on your poetry. at present your batting 4 for 0 so please leave some feedback and be fair![]()
hi Tally, like wise people get to your poems as well
you wrote;
I am not a very good source of critique but I can say I loved the combination of words you used in both your poems. They resulted in a powerful impact despite how short they both are. it okay, like anything, feedback improves with practice. all we ask is that poets contribute; thanks you![]()
hi Antares,
thanks for the poem, don't forget to leave feedback elsewhere
welcome to the site (all three of you)
Please leave harsh feedback as want to improve, however at present my feedback will mostly be about how your words make me feel, and the odd reference to cliche, now I know how to spell it.



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