Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION 5

Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION 5

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12-02-2012, 05:02 PM

i enjoyed the read, and remember something almost similar from you before.

i think spotted a couple of missing commas and wondered if each spoken part should have it's own line?

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Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION 5 - by Todd - 12-02-2012, 10:02 AM

RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by arbil_poieo - 12-02-2012, 11:10 AM

RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by Todd - 12-02-2012, 11:19 AM

RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by billy - 12-02-2012, 05:02 PM

RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by TwistedAngel - 12-02-2012, 05:47 PM

RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by Todd - 12-02-2012, 09:58 PM

RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by milo - 11-12-2013, 09:22 AM

RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by Todd - 11-12-2013, 09:38 AM

RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by milo - 11-12-2013, 10:19 AM

RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by Todd - 11-12-2013, 11:10 AM

RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by milo - 11-12-2013, 11:15 AM

RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION - by Todd - 11-12-2013, 07:52 PM

RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION - by milo - 11-13-2013, 08:31 AM

RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION - by Todd - 11-13-2013, 08:41 AM

RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION 2 - by Todd - 11-20-2013, 10:38 PM

RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION 2 - by ChristopherSea - 11-22-2013, 02:03 AM

RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION 2 - by Todd - 11-22-2013, 11:37 PM

RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION 3 - by ChristopherSea - 11-23-2013, 12:13 AM

RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION 4 - by Todd - 11-26-2013, 11:41 AM

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