12-02-2012, 05:47 PM
sooo this is the re-write for the book then 
am suprised but not unhappy about how fast the pace is..am guessing the meat of the book is gonna be about the consequences
me only critique so far would be hurry up an get chap 2 posted an am intrested to see you can keep up the pace
theres enough detail without it being overloaded..the reader can fill in the blanks in their own way...i really like that
am suprised but not unhappy about how fast the pace is..am guessing the meat of the book is gonna be about the consequences
me only critique so far would be hurry up an get chap 2 posted an am intrested to see you can keep up the pace
theres enough detail without it being overloaded..the reader can fill in the blanks in their own way...i really like that