12-12-2012, 04:57 AM
Oh my God, I love this poem! Why did you change it? Put it back! Seriously, I think this one is infinitely better!
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Hello to you Rose love and thak you for such a nice comment.
Em just to comment on my own poem if that seems ok. Someone pointed out to me that I overused some words in this ie, cold, death and this stood to make it one dimensional. I also think that it was a bit overdrawn. I guess I just have to find the balance. But thank you again for your kind words
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Hello to you Rose love and thak you for such a nice comment.
Em just to comment on my own poem if that seems ok. Someone pointed out to me that I overused some words in this ie, cold, death and this stood to make it one dimensional. I also think that it was a bit overdrawn. I guess I just have to find the balance. But thank you again for your kind words