12-12-2012, 10:37 AM
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The magic can also go out of a poem if one of the parts is off too. All approaches have merit. There's only so far we can go in mild though.
We should probably take this up in another thread if we want to explore this further so as not be unfair to this thread.
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Just a question. Should I repost this in another thread and there I could explain what I was trying for in each line Then maybe you could let me know if I'm anywhere near.
As I've said I'm completely new to poetry so any and all help is very appreciated.
The magic can also go out of a poem if one of the parts is off too. All approaches have merit. There's only so far we can go in mild though.
We should probably take this up in another thread if we want to explore this further so as not be unfair to this thread.
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Just a question. Should I repost this in another thread and there I could explain what I was trying for in each line Then maybe you could let me know if I'm anywhere near.
As I've said I'm completely new to poetry so any and all help is very appreciated.