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The onset of winter
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usually we post any edits in the first post so people can see if it works or not without flying off to see the original in another place/post. we can if requested move a poem from one forum to another for things like a more in depth piece of crit or feedback
i reposted the edits in the original 1st post so you can see how it's done 
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The onset of winter - by Jae Mc Donnell - 12-11-2012, 11:12 PM
RE: The onset of winter - by Todd - 12-12-2012, 01:06 AM
RE: The onset of winter - by Jae Mc Donnell - 12-12-2012, 01:52 AM
RE: The onset of winter - by Rose Love - 12-12-2012, 04:40 AM
RE: The onset of winter - by Jae Mc Donnell - 12-12-2012, 04:57 AM
RE: The onset of winter - by Rose Love - 12-12-2012, 05:35 AM
RE: The onset of winter - by Jae Mc Donnell - 12-12-2012, 06:18 AM
RE: The onset of winter - by Rose Love - 12-12-2012, 07:30 AM
RE: The onset of winter - by Todd - 12-12-2012, 07:42 AM
RE: The onset of winter - by Rose Love - 12-12-2012, 08:24 AM
RE: The onset of winter - by Todd - 12-12-2012, 09:41 AM
RE: The onset of winter - by Jae Mc Donnell - 12-12-2012, 10:37 AM
RE: The onset of winter - by Todd - 12-12-2012, 11:25 AM
RE: The onset of winter - by billy - 12-12-2012, 11:06 AM
RE: The onset of winter - by billy - 12-12-2012, 11:31 AM
RE: The onset of winter - by Rose Love - 12-12-2012, 06:14 PM
RE: The onset of winter - by billy - 12-13-2012, 08:13 AM
RE: The onset of winter - by Leanne - 12-13-2012, 09:09 AM
RE: The onset of winter - by Jae Mc Donnell - 12-13-2012, 01:13 PM
RE: The onset of winter - by heslopian - 12-14-2012, 01:05 PM
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