The onset of winter

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The onset of winter

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12-13-2012, 09:09 AM

@ billy: As this is a critique forum, and the critique guidelines say It is possibly best to avoid giving “life advice” in a critique, other than as a direct requirement for interpretation of the piece, let's try sticking to the poem shall we? Thanks/ admin

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The onset of winter - by Jae Mc Donnell - 12-11-2012, 11:12 PM

RE: The onset of winter - by Todd - 12-12-2012, 01:06 AM

RE: The onset of winter - by Jae Mc Donnell - 12-12-2012, 01:52 AM

RE: The onset of winter - by Rose Love - 12-12-2012, 04:40 AM

RE: The onset of winter - by Jae Mc Donnell - 12-12-2012, 04:57 AM

RE: The onset of winter - by Rose Love - 12-12-2012, 05:35 AM

RE: The onset of winter - by Jae Mc Donnell - 12-12-2012, 06:18 AM

RE: The onset of winter - by Rose Love - 12-12-2012, 07:30 AM

RE: The onset of winter - by Todd - 12-12-2012, 07:42 AM

RE: The onset of winter - by Rose Love - 12-12-2012, 08:24 AM

RE: The onset of winter - by Todd - 12-12-2012, 09:41 AM

RE: The onset of winter - by Jae Mc Donnell - 12-12-2012, 10:37 AM

RE: The onset of winter - by Todd - 12-12-2012, 11:25 AM

RE: The onset of winter - by billy - 12-12-2012, 11:06 AM

RE: The onset of winter - by billy - 12-12-2012, 11:31 AM

RE: The onset of winter - by Rose Love - 12-12-2012, 06:14 PM

RE: The onset of winter - by billy - 12-13-2012, 08:13 AM

RE: The onset of winter - by Leanne - 12-13-2012, 09:09 AM

RE: The onset of winter - by Jae Mc Donnell - 12-13-2012, 01:13 PM

RE: The onset of winter - by heslopian - 12-14-2012, 01:05 PM

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