The onset of winter
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[quote='billy' pid='108538' dateline='1355471083']
Hi jae, it wasn't fighting, i was asked to keep feedback to the poem. and rightly so Wink

That's cool mate. I was only taking the piss all the same. Just really wanted to use the smiliesBig Grin

I added an update to the poem at the top. I have to say it is more towards what I originally want to so thanks for the help. It will help with any new stuff.
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Messages In This Thread
The onset of winter - by Jae Mc Donnell - 12-13-2012, 01:19 PM
RE: The onset of winter - by Philatone - 12-13-2012, 02:06 PM
RE: The onset of winter - by Jae Mc Donnell - 12-14-2012, 01:07 AM
RE: The onset of winter - by billy - 12-14-2012, 04:44 PM
RE: The onset of winter - by Jae Mc Donnell - 12-14-2012, 10:25 PM
RE: The onset of winter - by aaron - 12-15-2012, 09:57 PM
RE: The onset of winter - by Todd - 12-15-2012, 11:56 PM
RE: The onset of winter - by cidermaid - 12-16-2012, 06:19 PM
RE: The onset of winter - by Jae Mc Donnell - 12-17-2012, 10:21 AM
RE: The onset of winter - by Todd - 12-17-2012, 10:40 AM



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