12-21-2012, 07:39 AM 
	
	
	
		This was a thoughtful read. I especially like the last six lines, because to me you were telling about her wisdom and those lines kinda shows the wisdom. It has a sweet tone as an adult looking back with child-like admiration still.
My only critique is that line 2 is long, other than that a really amazing read.
	
	
	
My only critique is that line 2 is long, other than that a really amazing read.

 

 
