12-21-2012, 11:08 AM
Leanne, thanks for the welcome and the complimentary review. I hadn't thought 'memory-filled' was redundant til you pointed it out (and I'm trying hard to master succinctness!). I'll give that some thought defo - perhaps then post it on a more 'advanced' board? I really want to make sure I don't make a dick of myself before parading my wares all over!!
A-P thanks! As you also reckon L2 is too long I am going to have to sort it out. Yes her wisdom is what I wanted to put over but also all the other lovely things that grandmother's seem to be so adept at!!
Billy - if your avatar is meant to arrest - it certainly worked on me! I'm kinda proud of the feedback and maybe a little scared too that it may be downhill all the way from here! 'Memoried' would definitely work for me so serious thought on that one, thanks.
A-P thanks! As you also reckon L2 is too long I am going to have to sort it out. Yes her wisdom is what I wanted to put over but also all the other lovely things that grandmother's seem to be so adept at!!
Billy - if your avatar is meant to arrest - it certainly worked on me! I'm kinda proud of the feedback and maybe a little scared too that it may be downhill all the way from here! 'Memoried' would definitely work for me so serious thought on that one, thanks.