Two Things Made Her Smile

[billy]

Leanne, thanks for the welcome and the complimentary review. I hadn't thought 'memory-filled' was redundant til you pointed it out (and I'm trying hard to master succinctness!). I'll give that some thought defo - perhaps then post it on a more 'advanced' board? I really want to make sure I don't make a dick of myself before parading my wares all over!!
A-P thanks! As you also reckon L2 is too long I am going to have to sort it out. Yes her wisdom is what I wanted to put over but also all the other lovely things that grandmother's seem to be so adept at!!
Billy - if your avatar is meant to arrest - it certainly worked on me! I'm kinda proud of the feedback and maybe a little scared too that it may be downhill all the way from here! 'Memoried' would definitely work for me so serious thought on that one, thanks.

yeah, it's all down hill now, we reel you in then pounce
for most of us we're just please that poets try and be good poets, we're fine if they're learning or not as good as others. the usual state of affairs is, poets improve like fine wine, or turn to vinegar
you'll be okay