Two Things Made Her Smile

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This is the edit that I'll present for heavier critique. Thanks all.

Nana creaked her way around,
memoried eyes brimming ancient.
Two things made her smile:
Love of God and breathing.
Tales tippy-tapped from her
butterscotch-syrup lips.
I buried my nose into her folds
and smelled eternity.
She taught me to see
where the world’s texture
is so very, very thin;
That I must take care
not to rip it
and let emptiness in.

memorious (means having an unusually good memory)
memorious eyes brimming ancient.
I thought that has a better sounding tune