Say "Hi" in this Thread

[smakpopy]

Hello, i had written a poem and just tossed it up on a few forums.

The first place copied it off my paper was to some sort of poem roulette site that forced posters to review random poems in order to submit, needless to say since we didnt pick the poems were were reviewing we didnt choose ones of things we may like.

So my first review was "you took alot on that"

Its nice that someone had something to say about it when i posted it here.

I do want to mention that I have no formal collegiate training in writing and a very sloppy way of approaching grammar and handwriting, but i have read alot of various literature.

I am not very comfortable criticizing others works here, unless the writer and others posting here do not put much weight on my responses.