01-18-2013, 01:52 PM
The point for something like this is to keep writing. Don't worry about good. You may or may not like a poem. These are free write first drafts. If you write any you do like pop them in a critique forum. If you finish, you may reflect on a few good lines and concepts you'll keep. I like the two swift, the title and the last line. It's the danger of playing by rote. You going this alone, or do you want an opponent? Either is fine, of course.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
