Hey I edited the title of the thread. I hope you don't mind. Who knows over time you may want to do more of these.
You hit me with the King's Gambit. Arrggh.
To the poem: This is a nice solid piece. Keep going with the connections you make without worrying about every technical point and you'll be fine. I love the opening two lines. While I normally don't do a lot of end on a question poems, this one is quite good.
Now to consider my next move: accept or decline.
You hit me with the King's Gambit. Arrggh.
To the poem: This is a nice solid piece. Keep going with the connections you make without worrying about every technical point and you'll be fine. I love the opening two lines. While I normally don't do a lot of end on a question poems, this one is quite good.
Now to consider my next move: accept or decline.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson