01-20-2013, 02:26 PM
Hmm, you make a quiet move sound so depressing. I really like the refrain, it sets the mood for the whole poem. It gives a more gritty and mature feel to the game. Not sure why you need to include the phrase "Pussy Galore" though.
Boy Wonder
b4
A knight's aide,
Hungry for glory,
For chance to shine,
Like the chosen sacrifice.
What better way,
Than exposing the creep?
What better way,
Than capturing the spy?
Haste makes waste,
But he's desperate;
For opportunity
To outdo the knight.
Blinded by greed,
He forgot.
That bishop spies
Are trained in 50 different martial arts.
Boy Wonder
b4
A knight's aide,
Hungry for glory,
For chance to shine,
Like the chosen sacrifice.
What better way,
Than exposing the creep?
What better way,
Than capturing the spy?
Haste makes waste,
But he's desperate;
For opportunity
To outdo the knight.
Blinded by greed,
He forgot.
That bishop spies
Are trained in 50 different martial arts.
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