01-21-2013, 12:05 PM
James Bond lore is not my field of expertise, obviously. Your notation is correct. I like the title for this poem, and how 'asian' you make it. It's a complete change of tone from your previous one. 'Upgrading' the feel of bishop martial artists is also a nice touch. Unfortunately, I'll be challenging that. =)
Cinquain: You Brought Nothing to a Gun Fight!
c3
Master,
Of Dragon Style.
I hate to say this but
You brought nothing to a gun fight.
Bang bang!
This poem feels a little premature. Maybe I should have saved it for another move later? But heck, what's done is done.
Cinquain: You Brought Nothing to a Gun Fight!
c3
Master,
Of Dragon Style.
I hate to say this but
You brought nothing to a gun fight.
Bang bang!
This poem feels a little premature. Maybe I should have saved it for another move later? But heck, what's done is done.
Back!