Poetry Chess Game -- Brandon vs. Todd

[brandontoh]

Nice poem! =D Really enjoyed reading it. I like the way the stanzas are divided and the imagery as a whole. Maybe post it up in one of the critique sections? =x

Good Night
Nbxd2

Before I sleep,
I wish the world:
"Good night."

Then I switch off the light.

Before she closes her eyes,
I wish her:
"Good night."

Then He switches off her eyes' sparkle.

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Here's an extra stanza that didn't make it into the poem. =x

Before we get on the bed,
She wishes me:
"Good night."

And I know we won't sleep that night.