I like your use of forking in the poem. On line 6 maybe the or is throwing it off. Here's a triolet to answer yours.
Recipe for Escape
Nd5
It takes the Cheshire's floating grin
and lock picks from Houdini's throat.
Safecracker's touch to feel each pin.
It takes the Cheshire's floating grin
to laugh at fear that eats within.
This is an art, don't think to gloat.
It takes the Cheshire's floating grin,
and lock picks from Houdini's throat.
Recipe for Escape
Nd5
It takes the Cheshire's floating grin
and lock picks from Houdini's throat.
Safecracker's touch to feel each pin.
It takes the Cheshire's floating grin
to laugh at fear that eats within.
This is an art, don't think to gloat.
It takes the Cheshire's floating grin,
and lock picks from Houdini's throat.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
