01-28-2013, 08:57 PM
Ah now we settle for dueling rondelets (fun). I like the idea of a net that eats your skin. Here's my move and offering:
The Race
Ne3
This steeplechase
with hedgerow over open grave
This steeplechase
Hoofs spark upon a crumbling ledge.
Froth laves the skin in frenzied wave
The pace itself starts to enslave
this steeplechase.
The Race
Ne3
This steeplechase
with hedgerow over open grave
This steeplechase
Hoofs spark upon a crumbling ledge.
Froth laves the skin in frenzied wave
The pace itself starts to enslave
this steeplechase.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson