Poetry Chess Game -- Brandon vs. Todd

[brandontoh]

Darn. I was hoping you'd take my g2 pawn. =x The Tetractys is a simple form, but I like the way it looks. Not much to say about yours though. Good title, it helps make the imagery clearer.

Pantoum Sonnet - Things
Nxc4

It lets us live so it can exist,
It lets us live so we think about it.
The world doesn't love us,
Things don't revolve around us.

It lets us live so we think about it,
Our role in the grand scheme of things.
Things don't revolve around us,
Other than our wars and destruction.

Our role in the grand scheme of things,
Maybe is to hug those close to you, since
Other than our wars and destruction,
There's not much idiocy that repeats.

The world doesn't love us,
It lets us live so it can exist.

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Gah! This is so cliche. >< I love this form, but this one is so bad. ><