01-29-2013, 12:40 PM
"Why are his pupils stretching, reaching for sclera" -- I love that image!
Been there, but the addiction wasn't coke, it was porn. Nice.
I wonder what you'd think about shortening the last strophe a bit, to something like:
"Trapped beneath this blanket of snow,
all my money up the nose"
Rants suit you
Been there, but the addiction wasn't coke, it was porn. Nice.
I wonder what you'd think about shortening the last strophe a bit, to something like:
"Trapped beneath this blanket of snow,
all my money up the nose"
Rants suit you
It could be worse