01-30-2013, 02:06 PM
This one took awhile. I had a lot of trouble with it, and it shows. Inspiration is running kind of low again. =x It's a Tritina. =)
http://bensonofjohn.co.uk/poetry/formsse...ox=Tritina
Lucid
0-0
There’s no need to rush.
Nothing here is real, after all.
Deep breaths, take it slow, till you wake up.
So let it slowly rise up,
And feel your blood rush.
Relax yourself, but give it your all.
Pull them in, let them all
enjoy you, feel you up.
You’re in charge, so don’t rush.
Don’t rush, but when it all ends, you wake, and it’s still up. Darn.
http://bensonofjohn.co.uk/poetry/formsse...ox=Tritina
Lucid
0-0
There’s no need to rush.
Nothing here is real, after all.
Deep breaths, take it slow, till you wake up.
So let it slowly rise up,
And feel your blood rush.
Relax yourself, but give it your all.
Pull them in, let them all
enjoy you, feel you up.
You’re in charge, so don’t rush.
Don’t rush, but when it all ends, you wake, and it’s still up. Darn.
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