Poetry Chess Game -- Brandon vs. Todd
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Nice word choices there. It's a nice imagery, but for some reason it feels a little weak. I don't know why. Maybe it's because your poems before this are just better in my opinion? Anyways, here's my move.

Lancelot & Guinevere
Rd3

Love that never should have been,
Brings kingdom down into has-been.
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Messages In This Thread
RE: Chess Game - by Todd - 01-18-2013, 01:52 PM
RE: Chess Game - by brandontoh - 01-18-2013, 01:55 PM
RE: Chess Game - by Todd - 01-18-2013, 01:57 PM
RE: Chess Game - by brandontoh - 01-18-2013, 02:12 PM
RE: Chess Game - by Todd - 01-18-2013, 02:22 PM
RE: Chess Game - by brandontoh - 01-18-2013, 02:37 PM
RE: Poetry Chess Game -- Brandon vs. Todd - by brandontoh - 02-01-2013, 10:20 AM
RE: Poetry Chess Game -- Brandon vs. Todd - by rowens - 02-03-2013, 01:21 AM
RE: Poetry Chess Game -- Brandon vs. Todd - by rowens - 02-03-2013, 01:29 AM
RE: Poetry Chess Game -- Brandon vs. Todd - by rowens - 02-03-2013, 03:08 AM
RE: Poetry Chess Game -- Brandon vs. Todd - by rowens - 02-03-2013, 12:21 PM
RE: Poetry Chess Game -- Brandon vs. Todd - by rowens - 02-03-2013, 01:20 PM
RE: Poetry Chess Game -- Brandon vs. Todd - by rowens - 02-03-2013, 01:47 PM



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