02-01-2013, 10:20 AM
Nice word choices there. It's a nice imagery, but for some reason it feels a little weak. I don't know why. Maybe it's because your poems before this are just better in my opinion? Anyways, here's my move.
Lancelot & Guinevere
Rd3
Love that never should have been,
Brings kingdom down into has-been.
Lancelot & Guinevere
Rd3
Love that never should have been,
Brings kingdom down into has-been.
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