02-01-2013, 11:13 PM
Yeah, I try to do forms not already in the poetry practice exercises section. Hopefully more people will get to know about them, other than the two of us. This one is called the Balasi Stanza.
http://bensonofjohn.co.uk/poetry/formsse...i%20Stanza
To Zinc
Qg4
Come on Zinc, let's dance;
Get lost in this trance.
Get high, then we shall sing.
You said you're crazy,
And your life hazy;
So let this waltz make clean
All uncertainties
And bring harmony.
Zinc, will you be my queen?
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Okay, this is a really embarrassing poem to post. I just wrote it but well, it's about my high school crush. Her nickname is Zinc, and well, I'm over it but you know, memories.
By the way, I have this idea for a poem which I think is not bad. Now, I know I can just workshop it, but I'm hoping for a suitable move to post it under. =) I don't think any guy will say it's a bad concept. It's about being touched by a woman after all.
http://bensonofjohn.co.uk/poetry/formsse...i%20Stanza
To Zinc
Qg4
Come on Zinc, let's dance;
Get lost in this trance.
Get high, then we shall sing.
You said you're crazy,
And your life hazy;
So let this waltz make clean
All uncertainties
And bring harmony.
Zinc, will you be my queen?
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Okay, this is a really embarrassing poem to post. I just wrote it but well, it's about my high school crush. Her nickname is Zinc, and well, I'm over it but you know, memories.
By the way, I have this idea for a poem which I think is not bad. Now, I know I can just workshop it, but I'm hoping for a suitable move to post it under. =) I don't think any guy will say it's a bad concept. It's about being touched by a woman after all.
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