02-02-2013, 01:42 AM
Love poems are always embarrassing. That's sort of the point. (Hi AJ)
Here's my move and Balasi Stanza:
Rapunzel
Be6
A golden stairway
Tress superhighway
A prince and his tower
Eager to befriend
By morn’ now descend
Flaccid robbed of power
Better he dangles
Then sullen tangles
Of this yellow bower
Here's my move and Balasi Stanza:
Rapunzel
Be6
A golden stairway
Tress superhighway
A prince and his tower
Eager to befriend
By morn’ now descend
Flaccid robbed of power
Better he dangles
Then sullen tangles
Of this yellow bower
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
