02-03-2013, 01:22 AM
You shouldn't have moved it to e7. =x I think that works well though. Poetry is not meant to be so strict; in my opinion anyway. This next one is called a minute poem. =)
http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/minute.html
Kathy (Catty)
Qh4
'I'll stay,' promise under moonlight,
Witnessed by night.
With such ardour,
You enamoured.
With those words, the night got coloured
Into ballad;
And I let go
Unto the flow.
Hoping if my sanity cracked
You'll bring me back.
Please, do not laud
A girl so flawed.
http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/minute.html
Kathy (Catty)
Qh4
'I'll stay,' promise under moonlight,
Witnessed by night.
With such ardour,
You enamoured.
With those words, the night got coloured
Into ballad;
And I let go
Unto the flow.
Hoping if my sanity cracked
You'll bring me back.
Please, do not laud
A girl so flawed.
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