02-03-2013, 10:31 AM
Rowens: Sorry I missed your question. No she didn't put in the semicolon. =) What kind of dream about her, I wonder.
Todd: Yours is such a pessimistic poem. I especially like the first and third stanza, they have clear imageries that work well.
The next one is a sedoka! We done forms that must rhyme, now to a form the must not rhyme!
http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/sedoka.html
Rh3
Why do people try,
When all hope abandoned them
And they know the fight pointless?
To go out in style;
To never stop your struggle.
This is what being human means.
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Oh wow, this poem sucks. Darn. I'm beginning to think that writing the moment I wake up is a bad idea.
Todd: Yours is such a pessimistic poem. I especially like the first and third stanza, they have clear imageries that work well.
The next one is a sedoka! We done forms that must rhyme, now to a form the must not rhyme!
http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/sedoka.html
Rh3
Why do people try,
When all hope abandoned them
And they know the fight pointless?
To go out in style;
To never stop your struggle.
This is what being human means.
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Oh wow, this poem sucks. Darn. I'm beginning to think that writing the moment I wake up is a bad idea.
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