Torture
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This seems pretty good. It tells the simple story with just enough detail. If there's a serious question, it'll probably be where the "(I wouldn't)" should go. Which line would be best for it.
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Torture - by heslopian - 02-05-2013, 03:39 AM
RE: Torture - by rowens - 02-05-2013, 04:20 AM
RE: Torture - by heslopian - 02-05-2013, 05:24 AM
RE: Torture - by rowens - 02-05-2013, 06:10 AM
RE: Torture - by benthejack - 02-05-2013, 07:04 AM
RE: Torture - by heslopian - 02-05-2013, 07:07 AM
RE: Torture - by cidermaid - 02-05-2013, 05:02 PM
RE: Torture - by heslopian - 02-05-2013, 06:22 PM
RE: Torture - by serge gurkski - 02-05-2013, 10:23 PM
RE: Torture - by Bizzy - 02-06-2013, 01:13 AM
RE: Torture - by heslopian - 02-06-2013, 03:55 AM
RE: Torture - by lolo - 02-08-2013, 07:01 PM
RE: Torture - by heslopian - 02-08-2013, 09:25 PM



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