02-08-2013, 05:11 PM
nice edit jae. still needs a little more work though.
the seedlings in darkness works.
words like desire. heaven's etc are the other words lolo was on about.
the seedlings in darkness works.
words like desire. heaven's etc are the other words lolo was on about.
(02-07-2013, 11:09 PM)Jae Mc Donnell Wrote: Souls held in darkness,
Spring with giddy desires
Heavens' birth from earth
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Seedlings in darkness,
spring from desire and ground
Heavens' birth from earth