My First Ever Haiku

[AspiringWordWeaver]

That's really great. Even though it's a cold image, I get a real warm feeling, as in warm fire, fall asleep.
But on my last haiku I was told you shouldn't use adjectives. So maybe change out sleepy for sleeping maybe or drifting might work

Pristine snow blanket
Veils the field a sleepy hue --
The world falls asleep

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This was quite evocative for me. However, I did struggle a bit with "sleepy hue." Partly, I think, because I find it hard to picture white as being sleepy. Also, the repetition of the root word sleep in two successive lines is not ideal. This is already good, and I think a minor tweak or two would kick it up another notch.