My First Ever Haiku

[Hurst]

This is the first haiku I have ever written. Still can't believe I actually saved it.

Pristine snow blanket
Veils the field a sleepy hue --
The world falls asleep

I agree with the person who said it's simultaneously warm and cold. It's a nice juxtaposition. I personally don't like the word 'hue'. I feel like it's an archaic word, and, don't get me wrong, some archiac words are interesting, but this one felt out of place. I love the idea of the world falling asleep in this winter place though.