02-26-2013, 06:26 PM
well done! comfortable and frigid all at once.
building on cidermaid's comment, snow does have many hues. maybe change the word sleepy and then change hue to hues. as it stands I agree that hue is a bit out of place-- I don't really see where the color fits in.
building on cidermaid's comment, snow does have many hues. maybe change the word sleepy and then change hue to hues. as it stands I agree that hue is a bit out of place-- I don't really see where the color fits in.
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The howling beast is back.
The howling beast is back.