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It's not really winter here...
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02-26-2013, 08:57 PM
(12-20-2012, 08:36 PM)Hurst Wrote: Breath on frosted glass.it makes a good senryu, i'm not sure you need finge and you def don't need a period in any line of haiku or senryuthe last line is excellent and adds lots to such a short poem. don't overly worry about sylable counting as they're really just a guide. |
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It's not really winter here... - by Hurst - 12-20-2012, 08:36 PM
RE: It's not really winter here... - by arbil_poieo - 12-21-2012, 01:02 PM
RE: It's not really winter here... - by Hurst - 01-05-2013, 12:41 PM
RE: It's not really winter here... - by arbil_poieo - 01-05-2013, 01:50 PM
RE: It's not really winter here... - by Hurst - 01-05-2013, 02:33 PM
RE: It's not really winter here... - by brandontoh - 01-05-2013, 03:31 PM
RE: It's not really winter here... - by Hurst - 01-05-2013, 08:05 PM
RE: It's not really winter here... - by AspiringWordWeaver - 02-26-2013, 06:04 AM
RE: It's not really winter here... - by Hurst - 02-26-2013, 03:43 PM
RE: It's not really winter here... - by billy - 02-26-2013, 08:57 PM
RE: It's not really winter here... - by Hurst - 02-27-2013, 08:51 AM
RE: It's not really winter here... - by newsclippings - 02-27-2013, 06:05 AM
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