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I Don't Care
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02-27-2013, 07:26 AM
(02-27-2013, 06:46 AM)rowens Wrote: You put "love" on the next line, so you wanted a pause, and a comma in that situation doesn't fit well. I've tried that before too. And if you didn't want any longer pause than the line break will do, then it isn't really needed. You probably don't want a too long pause anyway do you?Yeah, I think it flows better without the comma. Thanks |
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I Don't Care - by Wjames - 02-27-2013, 06:01 AM
RE: Untitled - by rowens - 02-27-2013, 06:06 AM
RE: Untitled - by Wjames - 02-27-2013, 06:34 AM
RE: Untitled - by newsclippings - 02-27-2013, 06:07 AM
RE: Untitled - by rowens - 02-27-2013, 06:46 AM
RE: Untitled - by Wjames - 02-27-2013, 07:26 AM
RE: Untitled - by justcloudy - 02-27-2013, 07:33 AM
RE: Untitled - by Wjames - 02-27-2013, 08:01 AM
RE: Untitled - by Keith - 02-27-2013, 08:40 AM
RE: Untitled - by Wjames - 02-28-2013, 01:57 AM
RE: Untitled - by Wjames - 02-28-2013, 05:56 AM
RE: Untitled - by rowens - 02-28-2013, 05:59 AM
RE: Untitled - by Wjames - 02-28-2013, 06:05 AM
RE: Untitled - by rowens - 02-28-2013, 06:07 AM
RE: Untitled - by justcloudy - 02-28-2013, 09:16 PM
RE: Untitled - by Wjames - 03-02-2013, 03:34 AM
RE: I Don't Care - by Wjames - 03-14-2013, 04:11 AM
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