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02-27-2013, 08:01 AM
(This post was last modified: 02-27-2013, 08:04 AM by Wjames.)
(02-27-2013, 07:33 AM)goldyfish Wrote: love this. the rhythm is enchanting. reminds me of pink floyd... I see it as how you might see life during a really great trip.
"trip" might work as a double meaning title, but dunno if that works for you.
Thanks, I'm glad you like it

. It is sort of about both kind of trips. I wrote the last half on a train ride, after I had written the first half a couple of weeks ago.