It's not really winter here...

[Hurst]

Breath on frosted glass.
Window sweating. Fingertip
writes a naughty word.

it makes a good senryu,
i'm not sure you need finge and you def don't need a period in any line of haiku or senryuthe last line is excellent and adds lots to such a short poem. don't overly worry about sylable counting as they're really just a guide.

So the syllables don't matter that much? Is it just a shorter line, followed by a longer line, then another shorter one? I think I like the word 'fingertip' because of the crisp sound in 'tip', reminding me of the preciseness of the finger itself.
Thanks for the reply.

-Hurst

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ooooooooo this is nice.

I once tried to write something like this.
I failed.

Nicely done!

Thanks for the compliment. I'm sure you wrote something better on another topic.

-Hurst