02-28-2013, 09:16 PM
the first stanza ties to together for me, really like it. but for the sake of rhythm I would put
"Time flies
when you're alone.
That’s best,
it's all I’ve known.
I haven’t seen her face in years.
But I don't care
for her anymore."
or something like that. might just be personal preference.
but really. gorgeous poem.
"Time flies
when you're alone.
That’s best,
it's all I’ve known.
I haven’t seen her face in years.
But I don't care
for her anymore."
or something like that. might just be personal preference.
but really. gorgeous poem.
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The howling beast is back.
The howling beast is back.