I Don't Care

[Wjames]

the first stanza ties to together for me, really like it. but for the sake of rhythm I would put

"Time flies
when you're alone.
That’s best,
it's all I’ve known.
I haven’t seen her face in years.
But I don't care
for her anymore."

or something like that. might just be personal preference.
but really. gorgeous poem.

That definitely has a better rhythm to it, but I like the line as more of a general statement about everything than just about her. I'll have to think about it, thanks for the tip.